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Wrote 5 pages of a mystery/crime-drama screenplay, does it grab your interest or put you to sleep?
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JordenS
Mar 21, 20:52
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_HfpWNVxfXhMURTREtsOXVjbjQ/edit?usp=sharing
JordenS
Mar 21, 20:52
says i need to request permission. but id rather not sign up to read it, sorry. but good luck. or if u make it public, then id read it
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islander
Mar 22, 08:35
This link should work: http://www.docdroid.net/ad9f/missing-grace.pdf.html
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JordenS
Mar 22, 14:09
worked. it didnt put me to sleep :) If u have a good story to tell, then keep at it
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islander
Mar 22, 18:22
Glad it wasn't that boring lol. Yeah I'm going to keep writing and thinking of what comes next. Was the writing clear for you?
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JordenS
Mar 22, 19:05
do you have the ages of the girls right? >
islander
Mar 22, 19:25
Those are good points, I will probably make some changes.
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JordenS
Mar 22, 19:44
I think the 7 year old could tell something bad was happening if it was a couple suspicious looking guys that did not look like parents.
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JordenS
Mar 22, 19:47