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do you have the ages of the girls right? >
the 7 yr old walking home, would she be able to recognize a 2yr old being kidnapped?
then when the father asks to hear his daughters voice, a 2yr old doesnt really speak into a phone
so that may not have been totally clear for me, but really get other opinions cuz i am no expert :)
Wrote 5 pages of a mystery/crime-drama screenplay, does it grab your interest or put you to sleep? {nm} Mar 21, 20:52
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_HfpWNVxfXhMURTREtsOXVjbjQ/edit?usp=sharing Mar 21, 20:52
This link should work: http://www.docdroid.net/ad9f/missing-grace.pdf.html {nm} Mar 22, 14:09
worked. it didnt put me to sleep :) If u have a good story to tell, then keep at it {nm} Mar 22, 18:22
do you have the ages of the girls right? > Mar 22, 19:25
Those are good points, I will probably make some changes. {nm} Mar 22, 19:44