Wrote 5 pages of a mystery/crime-drama screenplay, does it grab your interest or put you to sleep? {nm} Mar 21, 20:52
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B_HfpWNVxfXhMURTREtsOXVjbjQ/edit?usp=sharing Mar 21, 20:52
This link should work: http://www.docdroid.net/ad9f/missing-grace.pdf.html {nm} Mar 22, 14:09
worked. it didnt put me to sleep :) If u have a good story to tell, then keep at it {nm} Mar 22, 18:22
do you have the ages of the girls right? > Mar 22, 19:25
Those are good points, I will probably make some changes. {nm} Mar 22, 19:44
I think the 7 year old could tell something bad was happening if it was a couple suspicious looking guys that did not look like parents. Mar 22, 19:47